Ch 12 page 10

posted 9th Jun 2020, 8:12 AM

post a comment
author comments
view R. Burnett's profile

9th Jun 2020, 8:12 AM

R. Burnett

I can't tell if I am getting better at backgrounds or worse XD But I'll tell you this page took me like a week (neglecting it because I was struggling with panel 3.)

end of message
user comments
view Microraptor's profile

9th Jun 2020, 12:52 PM

Microraptor

I guess the raincoat vending machine suggests that it's always rainy in Crystaline Terrace? Very cyberpunk! :-D

end of message
view R. Burnett's profile

10th Jun 2020, 7:42 PM

R. Burnett

Heeeeeeck yeah! It rains a lot! :D

end of message
view crowbar's profile

11th Jun 2020, 11:05 AM

crowbar

I like the way the rain looks on this page, especially the faded-out background skyline in p3. That's not easy to pull off artistically, but it looks great here.

There are in fact vending machines in Japan that offer recycled umbrellas (https://soranews24.com/2018/06/09/japanese-vending-machines-loan-out-free-recycled-umbrellas-during-the-countrys-stormy-summer/), so the recycled raincoat dispenser is actually not that far from reality!

end of message
view R. Burnett's profile

11th Jun 2020, 10:46 PM

R. Burnett

Look I'm sorry Japan is just cyber punk already there is not much else to improve on there XD lol! jk jk

And thank you very much for the compliment! I worked hella hear on that background. T^T

end of message
rate this page: X X X X X
average rating: 0
post a comment